This thing…(Poorly Designed Document)

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Geez louise. Now- it took a while, but after about 30 minutes of searching, I was blessed with this gold mine of a document. My internal writing “mojo” is rapidly draining (a by-product of this lazy weekend), so i’ll go ahead and get to the point.

Also-I’d like to point out how, if read in the order that the article presents them, the acronym is actually “CRAP”. Heh-heh.

Contrast:

The uninspired choice of using red and blue for text colors had me focused more on the flyer’s appearance instead of what it was actually saying. Shame on you…er, miscellaneous campus organization.

Repetition: N/A

Alignment: 

Nothing really too outlandish going on in this regard. Although, If I DID have a problem, it would be how the laughably tacky bottom streamer is further from the bottom of the page as the top streamer was from the top. Moving it down could have had a ripple effect in allowing better proximity (foreshadowing) between paragraphs.

Proximity:

The intra-paragaph proximity (is that a thing?) wasn’t too terrible in this document, but I just wish that the more vital information was spaced out more strategically.

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